I really do like this, it's a good idea...like the originality.
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L.C
*plz comment my work, your opinions would be greatly appreciated*

I think that the formatting of this poem was great...i love the ryhming it was really original....thanx for writing it....it gives me a new perspective

LOVIN THIS POEM, I REALLY RELATE TO IT

I LOVE IT 2......CAN U DO ME A FAVOR N COMMENT MINES....

THANKS.............

Wow this is such a great poem i love it. Goodjob.

I like it. Great job.

Nicely written. I liked the... story line. I don't know if that makes sense to you, but I liked it.
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I really like this, i love the way it progresses, the repitition really sets it off. Wonderful.
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