Reversable Dreams.

Sounds like alot of dreams I have, great write. thx for taking time to rrc on my poem. I love the title of this too, very catchy

I enjoyed this, not the usual everyday poem, something different, great work. Thanks for commenting on my poems, the more you do the more I'll return the favour.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Coming from someone who suffers from a condition known as night terrors, this hit home for me..
To much for me as well, lol
But excellent portrayel as always
5/5
*Gem*

That last verse was really creepy. I was lying on my bed.. in the dark, reading it to myself. *shivers* Really good job on this one!..
Just one suggestion..

I think the last verse should be written like this;

Its here,
lurking over my shoulder.
Just waiting for me
to let my guard down,
before it attacks me,
and tears me
and my being apart.

I just thought it read a lot better that way. Up to you!..