by Darien
That last verse was really creepy. I was lying on my bed.. in the dark, reading it to myself. *shivers* Really good job on this one!.. |
by Gem
Coming from someone who suffers from a condition known as night terrors, this hit home for me.. |
by Wallace
I enjoyed this, not the usual everyday poem, something different, great work. Thanks for commenting on my poems, the more you do the more I'll return the favour. |
Sounds like alot of dreams I have, great write. thx for taking time to rrc on my poem. I love the title of this too, very catchy |