Comments : Saying Goodbye

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I like the mesage behind the poem. It is well writtren. I think you did a good job. It is good that you have joined us. Welcome.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I'll start by saying welcome =D
    I liked the emotion behind this poem i found it to be quite strong and powerful to tell you the truth.
    One think i think could make this poem a little better would be if you used the same amount of lines in each stanza, because the first one had 3 then then rest 4. I think it would make the poem flow alot better, but this didnt wreck the poem at all. Well done on this poem You put a fair amount of effort into this. In my eyes it deserves a 5/5 ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like all the lines and it seems really great dedication to everyone! nice and keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Welcome to this site katie..and i have to say that it was wonderful..you have talent if you keep it up
    my favorite lines are;

    Dreams may lie
    My wish will never come true
    My heart has failed
    to love you again.

    These were so sorrowful
    Good job
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Another good write, i feel your emotions in your poem and thats good news lol.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    A wonderful written peace of poetry, and I love how you got all your emotions down.

    very good job.
    -joy-