Deceived

by x Mo x   Apr 29, 2007


Once upon a time,
I shared with you my rhyme.
I thought you truly cared
About all that I shared.
Then one day it changed,
When I saw things rearrange.
You said you were curious.
I let you know the obvious.
You took it as a surprise.
Then told me of your lies.
Nothing could be said
To hide the things in my head.
My thoughts swirled anxiously.
Your words troubled me.
I wondered what lies I believed.
Wondered, how many you'd deceived.
It hurt to hear it from you.
I guess it was the best you could do.
Now I want back what I shared.
Because I know you don't care.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Saraphene

    Wow this is really good. lots of emotions.

    i like the rhymes too.

    keep it up
    5/5

    hugz

    saraphene

  • 17 years ago

    by Vodka

    Ohhhhhhhhh mo that stinks so bad. I feel for ya. But it was a very awesome poem, it rhymed nicely and totally fit with your situation. brilliant!

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Brilliant poem. Very nicely done.. So much feeling in it....

    Josie

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