Let me go

by bubbles2424   Apr 29, 2007


Let me go, see me fly
You know you'd rather see me die
You say you loved me the best
but you just see me like the rest.

Watch me go, watch me walk
You wanted to do anything but talk
I'm finally giving up on you
What else do you want me to do?

See me breathe, see me live
I gave all the love I could give
I can't believe I thought you were cool
Who am I kidding, you're just a fool.

Don't look at me, just pass me by
because our relationship was a lie
You expected me to care
Playing that card was like a dare.

No more loving, no more kissing
You know it's me you'll be missing
Don't be mad because you can't have your way
I told you if you didn't shape up, you'd pay.

No more me, no more you
this is the right thing to do
I know this is right, it can't be wrong
and just for my sake, I have to be strong.

Don't hold your breath, I won't call
I don't want anything to do with you at all

Just close your eyes and don't worry about me
Because thanks to you, I'm finally free.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Amazing! How wonderfully this piece rhymes n the meaning in it is nice. U hav strongly said u r rite n even proved with strong wordings. great just 5/5 frm my heart
    plx read my longest poem ' hide it conceal it...'

    With love
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This was seriously a wonderful poem i really like you style and the ending was so good keep up the good work.

    xxx alex xxx

  • Good poem.
    The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked the emotion also in this poem, It was portrayed nicely and had a great meaning behind it. Well down on a nicely written emotional piece of poetry you have here.~mel

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