I liked the emotion also in this poem, It was portrayed nicely and had a great meaning behind it. Well down on a nicely written emotional piece of poetry you have here.~mel

Good poem.
The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

This was seriously a wonderful poem i really like you style and the ending was so good keep up the good work.

xxx alex xxx

Amazing! How wonderfully this piece rhymes n the meaning in it is nice. U hav strongly said u r rite n even proved with strong wordings. great just 5/5 frm my heart
plx read my longest poem ' hide it conceal it...'

With love
Fsams