You know... I would say that it doesnt ryhme so its not very good. But yet you passed the ryhming and made it almost perfect ( nothing is perfect ). Yet i tell you now... that by writing this poem, many many people can relate to it. so i give you my young friend ( your older then I am lol ) a 5/5

HAHA I VOTED 5 ..
& YOU BETTER VOTE THE SAME FOR MINE !
ciao`s *