Heaven Is Her Suicide.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Apr 29, 2007


Where the rainbows hid behind the golden trees,
Her heart shattered, it brought her to her knees,
And in his hand, he held a sapphire porcelain tear,
Crystallizing from the warmth of all his fear.
Two fools in love, with hearts naive and young,
She can taste blood, from bite marks on her tongue;
When he holds her and lies, but she won't say -
What she really means to say, there's no right way.
And covering her in ecstasy, he shades his bright eyes,
Subliminal messages hidden in his myriad of lullabies.
The sunset swallows their silhouettes, hand in hand,
Strewn along the horizon, feet buried in the rusty sand -
And he held her in his arms when she slowly died,
But she won't admit, that Heaven is her suicide.

-Jenna Elphick
April 28, 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked this poem. The flow was good, along with the ending. Emotios were okay, it did seem a little bit dull in some parts, but overall they were good.
    Another great write.
    keep it up, hun.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by wipeurtearsaway

    I absolutly loved it! But i used to write a lot of things like that, and i got way to caught up in it, i got to the stage where i wanted to take my life. i still give it a 5/5 tho :D

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The description thru out this poem was magic! the flow was flawless and the imaginry was awesome. i love this poem. yet so sad too. have to add that, well written tho.

    5/5 David