The description thru out this poem was magic! the flow was flawless and the imaginry was awesome. i love this poem. yet so sad too. have to add that, well written tho.

5/5 David

I absolutly loved it! But i used to write a lot of things like that, and i got way to caught up in it, i got to the stage where i wanted to take my life. i still give it a 5/5 tho :D

I really liked this poem. The flow was good, along with the ending. Emotios were okay, it did seem a little bit dull in some parts, but overall they were good.
Another great write.
keep it up, hun.
5/5