I loved ur poem it reminds me my friends situation

Hmm I think that this poem should be under internet slang. I liked the subject but I think that writing it all in capitals and with all the slang it took away so much of the message that it should have been sending out. Try to use less I's and You's in your writing and it will be a lot better.

Thats a great poem. i know how you feel because i only felt like that like 3 weeks ago until he did become mine. if you comment my poems can you plz vote for it to. thanks . 5/5