by jason Apr 29, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Wanting a change |
by Alesia
This poem really speaks! I have been thinking about all of those things these days and when I read this poem it was like everything was clear. I loved the voice in this poem. It had a really nice flow. It wasn't to bad with being emotive, either. Great job! |
by Iris
I agree...great!!! |
A splending poem that is very touching..it really opens the readers to wonder what is acctually going around us,,,and outside our safe little cage we live in and the things those people in power do for the sake of power to overrule everyone else and take what rightfully owned by the deprived... |