Oh mygosh... this was the best poem i have ever read,,,,,,,,,its almost u speak what so many people feel..ur words are amazing..
great job

Great poem! It flowed so well and it had a great....rythm (not sure if thats the word Im looking for). I liked the feelings in it too. Great Job!

WOAH....this poem was extremely deep. as i read it i had to think about every word written. good work!there is soooooo much meaning to this poem! kep it up! i love ur writing!

Great flow! The ending was quite creative, and, like in your other poems, I could really see everything that you were describing! Nothing to change, so I'll end it there. 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
Thge Illusionist

Although this was a short, simple poem. It spoke volumes! It was so very excellent! I can't find the words to type about how much I enjoyed this poem, amazing work, yet again.

Alesia <3