Wonderfully written. One of the better poems I have seen on P&Q. I can’t wait to read more of your work.

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Good job on this one! I like the way you rhymed some lines :) the flow was smooth I like it keep writing! and welcome to P&Q :) - I just read your post in the 'Discussion'

This was rather delightful and refreshing to read. Thank you for sharing this piece to us! And welcome to the site! =)