Comments : An Everlasting Walk

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A sad piece indeed.
    'It gets too dark, for even cats to see'
    that line gave a good visual for sure. You've posted a lot of new poems! Exciting as always! Good job on this piece!
    Charisma*

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A sad piece with great visuals.

    • 7 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you. All of you, for your kindness