I like this a lot. It's really cute. It flows nicely, good work =]

Aww, this one's cute! (In a sorta sad, but really good kind of way!) I agree w/ Noel, it's got a good flow. Good poem, 5/5

Heartz! ^.^

This is sad.
But it didn't make me cry.
I love that you didn't go overboard.
On the very first stanza.
It would sound a whole lot better
If you
Just use
Everything is instead of everthing's.
It just sounds smarter.
All in all, it's good.
5/5?