The Pain Suffocates (acrostic)

by Brittany C   Apr 29, 2007


Time will never heal it.
Home is no home to me.
Emotions fill ever cell in me.

Pain engulfs my entire body
And never seems to rest.
I thought it would go away with time.
Nothing seems to help and nothing will.

Silence is all you here
Unannounced dangers surround
Fighting to take over your mind
Fling into you from nowhere
Opening your heart to more pain
Clawing at your darkening soul
Tainting your once luminous smile
Engulfing all the good that comes your way
Suffocating you with darkness

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  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy

    GRE|ATTT!!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Last line first verse, I think you mean every instead of ever. I thought it was great. I love the metaphors you used along with the word choice. Bravo. :) A five from me for sure.

  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Very good. 5/5

  • I effing love it good job maybe you can check out some of my poems maybe maybe not:)~melissaraye~

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I really love this one...excellent acrostic!...short but well penned!
    Good job!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

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