by Brittany C Apr 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Time will never heal it. |
by Daisy
GRE|ATTT!!!! 5/5 |
Last line first verse, I think you mean every instead of ever. I thought it was great. I love the metaphors you used along with the word choice. Bravo. :) A five from me for sure. |
Very good. 5/5 |
I effing love it good job maybe you can check out some of my poems maybe maybe not:)~melissaraye~ |
I really love this one...excellent acrostic!...short but well penned! |