I think this is a great poem, if you feel really depessed writting poetry is a great way to get feelings out, when you write just use words to describe exactly how you feel.
take care,
Julia jade

I effing love it.
I love poems that don't rhyme.
To me, they're more mysterious.
Lol.
But the third line in the first stanza
I think that could be changed into
Something different
For example
Emotions fill my cup.
Or something like that.
Other wise.
5/5 ?

Ohhh. I liked this poem. :D I love acrostic poems, they're quite fun to do, and read. Keep it up, hunni.

Good Poem,
nice felling you gave to it
and it really impulsive.
Good job.

I like it.. yes its short..and very sad.. anyway good job.. keep up the good work.

I enjoyed this one alot, short and simple, yet what you want to say is there, I didn't even realize it was an acrostic until I read your comment saying that it was the first one you had written *Like this*
I thought it was great, they are alot of fun to read and write, I just wrote one, similar title. But anyhow, great work, keep it up girly.
-Ally

I think you did a good job. it is hard to do something that you are not familair with, or comfortable with. The ones I did were my first of this type to. I loved it 5/5

I liked how this one was set up. It reminding me of the poems that they had us write using our names in school. The flow was really nice. ^.^

Alyson

Very short but touchy. it touched my heart great work 5/5

I really love this one...excellent acrostic!...short but well penned!
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I effing love it good job maybe you can check out some of my poems maybe maybe not:)~melissaraye~

Very good. 5/5

Last line first verse, I think you mean every instead of ever. I thought it was great. I love the metaphors you used along with the word choice. Bravo. :) A five from me for sure.

GRE|ATTT!!!! 5/5