Aw. That is just beautiful.
The flow was amazing.
The rhyming didn't seemed
forced at all. This is a cute and
wondeful poem. God bless 5/5
You're a telented writer!
<3Tay^__^ily

Oh this was so cute I wish you would have kept going cuz i really liked it and it was a very easy poem to read as in it wasn't filled with complications it just was what it was nice job

Wonderful peom. I loved the discriptions you used. 5/5

Oohh!! I really love this one. It's great!! Sooo adorable.

I can imagine it clearly in my head.
It was well written.
Although I found it kind of dull.
There is no mystery into
No twists and turns.
But like I said.
Well written.
So I give it a 5 :]

Absolutely Adorable!.
I loved it. The flow was awesome, the imagery was great, overall a great read.

Keep It up,
Elainex