Am I going insane?

Alright what to say what to say...well the flow was off a little bit in this one. The structure was good as well as your puncuation.

In this line, "And accept that your gone." the word "your" should be "you're"

Overall it was a semi decent write, keep up your hard work.

Peace, Joe

Wow!! i like it alot!!
and itz not short it good :)
<3
LORiSSa

K, well i think you should add the other half of the poem. Becuase even before i read that comment, i thought there was something missing. It kinda messes up the structure as well when you dont add the whole poem. Anyways overall i liekd the begining of this poem. I read your first stanza and wondered why this was in the love poem section of the site. Then you go on to explain why it was in the love section. The secound stanza was quite sad, and very emotional. Liked the third stanza, because it shows how you feel. Kindof tells a story. I really liekd it. Kepe writing, but i will recomment if you add the rest of the poem. Just send me a PM yeah? And im sorry i know i said ill do 2 of your poems, i dont usually read explicits. So PM me when you add another poem or soemthing please? Take acre and keep writing! xx

This is a really good poem i love the flow of the language

xxxx alex xxx

You did a good job on this poem. i gave it a 4/5 because it kind of had a wierd rhyming pattern but i still liked it!