Comments : Crystal Tears

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad. Beautifully penned. Imagery is excellent. This is a very heart touching piece.

    A heart glistens with chilling frost
    From thy transparent fears
    Glorious love the cost
    Drowning in crystal tears

    Loved your ending.
    Great job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Glistening dew drops of cutting ice

    Dreary trails of heightened sadness

    A heart glistens with chilling frost

    ^^^^
    Tonya these lines are just amazing!
    OMG I even read them together and they even sound amazing that way too.
    Wonderfully penned, my friend!