WOW! ..that is a really good poem...the rhyme is great!...very creative...never thought it was a dream ....till the end :)..good job

Okay, this had a humorous ending :) Umm...I thought I'd tell you there are a lot of typos in it though... lines 18, 22, and 31. I'm not nit-picking I swear...I just thought I'd know so that when others read it, it flows better. I kept thinking the whole way through, wow I can relate to this, then the ending just made me laugh and think, 'nevermind'. heehee
Charisma*

This was a fun read. Your rhymes are really spot on.