by Bradley Peter Apr 29, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
In the day I sleep, in the night I dine |
by mossgirl19
This is the true vampire poem, hehe. I love the whole poem. Are you sure you are not a real vampire?? :-) Flowed really well and for me it doesn't need to be broken into stanzas anymore. It's great as it is. Fantastic. |
I had totally forgotten about this piece. Thank you for reminding me. I enjoyed re-reading it. |
by Louis
Good pacing, fluency and clarity. Try skipping lines next time so that the poem doesn't look like a mass of words 5/5 |
by Crystal Gaze
I liked it. |