I liked it.
It flowed well.
And was just Amazing!

I really don't know how to explain what it made me feel.
but well done.
5/5

Good pacing, fluency and clarity. Try skipping lines next time so that the poem doesn't look like a mass of words 5/5

This is the true vampire poem, hehe. I love the whole poem. Are you sure you are not a real vampire?? :-) Flowed really well and for me it doesn't need to be broken into stanzas anymore. It's great as it is. Fantastic.