Comments : Life

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Very true.
    sad but true.
    Excellant!

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    I like the smoothness (is that even a word, "smoothness"?). I also like how you get the point across without question. Your word choice is also simple but very clear and well used.

  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    Sad...but true.
    I like this poem, sometimes life is just like this.