The one

by danielle   Apr 29, 2007


When i saw him,
My heart stopped.
I knew at that moment
That i would do anything to make him happy
If only he would feel the same
not to just be friends
but to be the one that he calls his
I want to be that ONE!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    I know how you feel. Great job!

    ~Lizzie~

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Thanks, yeah i jsut wrote that becuz, i was just thinking. Why cant lol. All my exs broke up with me becuz they wanted more/ it sucks. I relee like this, haha, i can relate, except when i saw a guy like that, i said your hot lol...on accident

  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    Sweet.
    Short.
    Good.

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Short and to the point, but I didnt feel anything. There was no real emotion behind it. Maybe there is and I just can't feel it. Over all, it was ok.

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