This is a great poem...it shows alot of emotion....sadness....happiness...hope...i like it alot ...it almost makes one cry...its really good ...keep writing...we need more poems like this....its very unique!

That was wonderful.
I'll admit - I have an obsession with stars.... [[Don't ask... I'm weird like that.. ;] ]

The imagery was beautiful & your wording was simply fabulous. The flow was flawless & overall, it was a superb write. Keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.