by BeautifulxMess Apr 29, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The sky above cries out to it's Sun. |
An exellent poem ,some of the ryhimg was out of place but its nice to see a change :D |
This is a very nice poem, I love the detail you used while describing the poem. I felt it was very appropriately titled, and flowed nicely. Great job! |
by honeypot
I think that this was beautifully worded.love the way that you match things together like the roots drinking up the water etc. very well thought out and nicely written! |