A good piece, that flowed quite nicely. I liked the way this was written, and I feel that the first stanza was my favorite. I must say though, that I didn't like the last two lines, because they didn't rhyme. I think this poem regressed as it continued through, to the end. Sorry if I seem harsh. I don't mean to be, nor do I want to be, but I feel that I should say my true opinion. (Unlike most on this site)

Brad