by Rachel Apr 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Looking into his eyes |
by Jess
A-MAZING.... this was a great poem..... you have talent... keep up the good work and thanks for commenting my poem.... |
That was friggin awsome prolly my new favorite poem lyke ever....again thnx for commenting on my poem i appriciate it alot... keep up the good work |
by Mandy
This was a awsome poem...i loved how it flowed...beautiful! |
by Daniel
Thanks for telling me that i have a talent, but to see talent you should look into the mirror. This was great and i understood every peice of it. Keep adding more poems because i like to read them. |
by just me
O/c i dont mind commenting some more of your work, when ever you want some one t read your work i will. just say so, k? well n e ways i really like this alot, it's very nice, especially the closing stanza, that's my fav. but i like the sadness of it the fact that he's breaking her heart and she's still lovin him, it's very sad but it's also very good....i like it alot. nice write. |