His Voice

by Rachel   Apr 29, 2007


Looking into his eyes
all she hears is his yelling voice
these words are louder than real ones
she can't get rid of them, she has no choice

she tries to block them out
by singing her favourite song
but the voices only become louder
they tell her that she's wrong

her friends have tried to help her
but their voices are left unheard
for his is so much louder
she doesn't hear a word

why can't she just forget them;
those horrible things he said
maybe they were true
she might as well be dead

and it's all her fault
that she lost her favourite boy
these tears will always describe
the feelings that destroy

her heart is now so empty
without him be her side
her tangled heart is begging
by him to be untied

she tries to make things better
but it just is not the same
for all these contradictions
she has herself to blame

with silent voices she tries,
to tell him that she needs him
but he can't hear her screaming
her voice has faded dim

his yelling voice has over-powered
all the things she wants to say
this trap is surrounding her
more and more with each new day

to escape seems so impossible
when she cannot say a thing
no one hears her sad tune
cause the song is silent that she sings

silent; for all the voices,
have diminished all the real
they keep on playing over again
sadder they make her feel

boy please stop your yelling
it's breaking this heart of hers
the heart that was always so gentle
the heart that had always been yours

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    A-MAZING.... this was a great poem..... you have talent... keep up the good work and thanks for commenting my poem....

    xoxoxo
    Jess

  • 17 years ago

    by secretlylovinghim

    That was friggin awsome prolly my new favorite poem lyke ever....again thnx for commenting on my poem i appriciate it alot... keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy

    This was a awsome poem...i loved how it flowed...beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel

    Thanks for telling me that i have a talent, but to see talent you should look into the mirror. This was great and i understood every peice of it. Keep adding more poems because i like to read them.

  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    O/c i dont mind commenting some more of your work, when ever you want some one t read your work i will. just say so, k? well n e ways i really like this alot, it's very nice, especially the closing stanza, that's my fav. but i like the sadness of it the fact that he's breaking her heart and she's still lovin him, it's very sad but it's also very good....i like it alot. nice write.
    <3
    L.C