O/c i dont mind commenting some more of your work, when ever you want some one t read your work i will. just say so, k? well n e ways i really like this alot, it's very nice, especially the closing stanza, that's my fav. but i like the sadness of it the fact that he's breaking her heart and she's still lovin him, it's very sad but it's also very good....i like it alot. nice write.
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L.C

Thanks for telling me that i have a talent, but to see talent you should look into the mirror. This was great and i understood every peice of it. Keep adding more poems because i like to read them.

This was a awsome poem...i loved how it flowed...beautiful!

That was friggin awsome prolly my new favorite poem lyke ever....again thnx for commenting on my poem i appriciate it alot... keep up the good work

A-MAZING.... this was a great poem..... you have talent... keep up the good work and thanks for commenting my poem....

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Jess