*Lets out breath* Amazing! I was holding my breath and I didn't even realize it. *Wipes at tear* I was crying and I didn't know.
My gosh this is spectacular! It's so captivating and full of emotion!
My heart is pounding.
Amazing job!
5/5 Definitly

I love these lyrics, theyre are very good, the flow is absolutely excellent, i give it a 5/5!!!

Jenna, you have been in a writing spree! I need to catch up! But, I'm glad that I chose this one to read. Oh, Honey this was amazing! I could imagine this being sung... almost contry-ish. The chorus is what really got me. It was a beautiful piece of work. Btw, yes, that was my first explicit piece... true story, believe it or not... :] *wink wink*

heartcha babe! <3

It made me want to cry. I can easily relate to this poem. You did a wonderful job with it. :D I believe, this too is one of your best.

Keep it up.
5/5