Amazing. I thought this poem extreamly lovely. Well penned, the flow was great, the meaning excellent, the emotion's touching.

Kudos for a fine job.
keep it up.
Elaine

What a lovely poem....It is really sweet, I wonder if you have showed her this? if not I bet you should, No girl can resist this stuff, exspecially if it is written about her.. Some guy wrote me this poem about me last night and it was sort of like this, he's not a very good poet, but he tried, and it was gorgeous... anyway, yeah, but I think this is a song write, cause it has a chorus? well I like it, but I think some bits are abit unusual
''My heart and soul would be
Her everything'' that sounds abit obnoxious......but I guess I know what you are expressing...good work!!
LUCKY GIRL......grrrr *glares*
lolz =p