I love it!
The vocab, the flow, the whole tone and imagery..
Wow, i'm speechless!
However, i'm also stupid and have a few idea's of the meaning but none that are right. lmao
I'll keep at it
5/5
*Gem*

Excellent poem, you truly have a talent, thanks for commenting on my poems again. Keep up the good work.

Wow.
I really liked this.
It was really descriptive, and I like that.

5/5

I think you're a very gifted writer
I wish I had only half of your talent
I think everyone can find themself in your poems.
You tell what you're thinkin' but at the same time you give advice to people
at least that is what I think
this really helped me
thx

Nice! I really like the allegory, but I figure out what you're talking about though

A great poem with great choice of vocb...
thanks for ur comment.

The title alone got me, everything else was just an added joy.

your servant:
david