by Teria Apr 30, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The reasons are unknown to all of man-kind. |
Wow, excellent write. I loved the ending. This was a outstanding and I liked your choice of words. Keep it up. |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. Though I think that people may find it a little hard to cetch on to. Other then that it has a nice flow and is a nice length. I think it just needs a little tweaking here and there. But I still loved it. 5/5 |
by Kaila
Wonderful! |