Wonderful!
Excellent!
Word choice!!
I loved the words in this poem.
THey made the poem all the better
they seem to just roll of your tounge with ease
nice job!

Very good poem. Though I think that people may find it a little hard to cetch on to. Other then that it has a nice flow and is a nice length. I think it just needs a little tweaking here and there. But I still loved it. 5/5

Wow, excellent write. I loved the ending. This was a outstanding and I liked your choice of words. Keep it up.

Peace, Joe