Comments : Who I Choose To Be.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very well stated.
    I wish the whole world were themselves
    More people in this world like you and me
    would be a good thing
    or caos(sp) haha
    nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem though I do think it would work better as a quote. Or it would be great if you could add on to it. Other then that it really is a nice poem and I agree with you on this one:) 5 out of 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    This is a really short poem, but I get what you are trying to say. And yeah this could be a quote too... but can't everything when you really think about it? This was also awesome!