There's this feeling.

by Teria   Apr 30, 2007


There's this feeling
that causes my heart to break.
There's this feeling
that makes my whole body shake.
There's this feeling
that controls the quake.
There's this feeling
that puts my soul at stake.

It roams from vein to vein,
attempting to cause slow, torturous pain.

It spreads through each bone,
making my whole body a suicide zone.

Relentlessly, I tend to give in,
forming a whole with gruesome
lengths of blood grasping my skin.

A voice whispering "You're mine,
You're mine." Repeating again and again
"I'll surely get you next time."

And, then...

There's this feeling
that causes my heart to break.
There's this feeling
that makes my whole body shake.
There's this feeling
that controls the quake.
There's this feeling
of fear.. that puts my soul at stake.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    The repetitveness of the line "There's this feeling" was a bit overplayed. I mean, you didn't have to do it that many times. However, the rest of the poem was good.

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    You write beautifully. I can relate to this poem really well because I am in love too and that's exactly how I feel.

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This was wonderfully written and it flowed really well. but i really didnt get the point of what you were trying to say? but overall,great poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem with a little work it would make a great song. It had a great flow to it and I really liked the words you used. It seems like a dark love poem to me that is part of the reason I like it. Another 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice!
    I could easily relate,
    which made me love it even more!!
    I liked the repeating stanza at the beginning and the end...
    my favorite part was...

    It roams from vein to vein,
    attempting to cause slow, torturous pain

    That showed a lot of emotion and imagery and I loved it

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