Good thing my love isn't deadly or you'd be a goner my dear =)
Brilliant as usual
Love you xxx

Daaaaammn homie!
guurrrl you gots da skillz dat killz

I liked it....I can relate to it from my past life as a pet dog, my dam owners were bitc***... :D lol

Great job on your formed poetry Gem. Your word choices excellent. Imagery great.
Take Care Love Cindy

Just like always
AMAZING
not much more to say
5/5

xoxo
Love
Chelsea

This is a cute poem! I really, really love it. Sometimes I wonder why love is like a disease. Hmm, I wish I could infect him by my deadly love. lol. Well done upon writing an excellent Triolet. Keep them coming! Love, Debbie

I read this and was thinking... "what have i done!"
My love isn't deadly so i'm safe :)
Love you loads
xxxx

In the second to last line, I think you mean t[r]ough. This is yet another piece of well written formed poetry by you. Great word usage. 5/5

marcella

I love this. You were restricted with space but you still did an awesome job on this, but nothing less is expected from a talented writer such as yourself lol. You really did a great job on this, you made it personal but yet relateable at the same time. Great job.

5.5
:]