I told you you could do it!
Look how well it turned out, i wouldn't change a thing honey. It's great as it is
I love you x x x

I like it....very erie and has that scary feel to it....totally cute

Gem
Excellent job. Imagery is really good I could see the Crimson moonlight shining.

Take care love Cindy

Hey!.....a beautifully peenned poem!...loved it!...tl care :-)

Another awesome piece, ma'dear. 'Twas really a delight to read. I love the slightly eerie atmosphere in it and the imagery you never failed to create vividly. Wonderful! Keep them coming! Love, Debbie

Wow what a great job and such great use of words. keep your amazing work up hun

love
Chelsea

Ohh, I loved this. :] The description was perfection, I could see it all.. perfectly. The flow was a bit off, but it always seems that way when I read rondelet's, eh. I have no idea why, but I'm sure it's not really messed up, just me. The rhyming was quite good, along with the feeling and descripition.

Keep it up, hun.
<3 Teria.

Great descriptive words in this poem as well. So, of course the imagery was fantastic. :] I really liked this style of poetry and I think you wrote it very well. 5/5

marcella

I loved this ! The imagery was great, it really helped to pull me in to what you were saying, `tis really was a great poem, I loved it.

5.5
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This was a very captivating read, your images blew me away yet made the poem come alive. Excellent work, this was a joy to read! 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne