Comments : Mistakes....

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow loved the depth and from the heart, could use a little more transition, could you plz read my newest one it relates to your situation.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I have no words to express the feelings i had by reading this poem.Is great.Is written from your heart and that's why Is very real ..Keep on the good work and take care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX