Hahaha. i had trouble. i wanted to have other words in there. but this was very funny anyway.

5/5 David

Oh my... my eyes are spinning out of their sockets and my toungue is tied in knots..
Whew!
5/5
*gem*

Lol I love this poem; it's very amusing. Just the thing I need to lighten up my dreary day.

Wow try saying that 5 times fast lol .. i couldnt even read it once.. it took me a while but it was funny

Wow.. it makes sense although it's a bit confusing.

Hehe this confused me but I liked it anyway. x

Lol, excellent, that was like three tongue twisters combined into one, interesting.

Wow I tryed I lost lol.

LMAO, that takes true skill, *passes out from trying to read it again*
5/5

Wow that was crazy I am a tongue twister reader expert and even I was tied in nots after trying yours

Wow thats long!!! nice story ... hehe lol

Wow thats long!!! nice story ... hehe lol