Outlooks and Requiems

Beautiful poem, dear. It's full of lines destined to be quotes, because of it's witty rhyme and powerful meaning. Like the first line, 'I write to calm the silence,' that was classic and a funny brain teaser. This is an incredibly strong poem, no doubt. The ending pops out at me and punches me in the face, seemingly, because of how true I find it, and how simply, but magestically it was written. The rest of the poem was of the same high quality. This is an example of how to make a perfect poem.

Truly yours,

~Richie

I thought it good, especially the ending talking about madness that ensues, i thought the format and pacing very well done

your servant:
atticus

I loved it. The first stanza had to be my favorite, but the whole poem was great. I think it's a great topic, feelings most everyone can relate to, but it's still very unique. Very well written, word choice was great, as always.

5/5

Wow, i loved it, the ryhming was smooth and it didnt seem forced at all, i liked to see the way that you pulled it all together

Again the word choice has left me speechless this poem is amazing. I am not sure I got your entire meaning, but the flow was great, the emtions were heartfelt, and deep, and the vocab was the best. 5/5