I know what you meant here and i feel bad after realizing the fact that this has been going for so many years now and things are not changing much. But i am they will and i hope you hv that feeling too..coz things cant change unless you also want them too.

all the best and take care

Ah well done. this was excellent. another beautiful poem that was entwined with so much emotion.

5/5 David

"Your love was all I had
Can't live without you near
Feeling your loving touch
Nights are what I fear"

Aw.. that made me want to shed a tear. your poems always seem to do that to me, the sheer emotion and simplicity is always so heart breakingly beautiful..
Take care Cindy
5/5
*Gem*

Nicely written...very sad and touching...good flow and rhyme....

In my dreams I will roam
Calling out your name
Waiting for your reply
Just wanting things the same

Someday...you'll be together again....Love, Debbie

Excellent poem, the flow was superb, but i wished it was a little longer and the ending was good but i think it could have been better, but great job, keep it up.

This is very sad but very good poem cindy, love the flow, i give it a 5/5 as always!!! keep them coming!!!!

Ohh just lovely

"Darkness closes in on me
Thoughts of you cloud my mind
Seems like I'm always searching
It's you I need to find"

What a charming piece you have here, Ms. Cindy! 'Twas simply heartwrenching and emotive. It actually had struck another arrow through my weary heart... I wish, oh, how I wish...
Take care. Love, Debbie

Paula
What a sad piece. Your pain and longing for the loss of the one you love can be felt throughout this poem. A feeling I know so well. Reading this brought on the tears. Very moving.

Yes, This rainy day feeling is making me blue
and all that surrounds me are memories of you,
I lay here real still and I so quietly pray
that once again you and I will be together some day.

Loved this stanza, memories are what keeps us going on days like this.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

I read your profile and then this poem, and now I am crying. It's very rare a poem can bring such emotion out in me. I hope you are doing well, and I'm sorry to read of your loss. Take care.

Very deep and emotional, i only wish i could make it easier for you. great poem, great rhymes, xox sam

Hi cindy,
its been a while, i liked this poem.
sorry i havent been online lately.
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Good peice of art. simple and relaxing good job

5/5

I liked this poem very much. It is sad and touching.

Wow this brought tears to my eyes. great emotion, strong words...

Your love was all I had
Can't live without you near
Feeling your loving touch
Nights are what I fear

This is what did it in for me...
I lost the love of my life just not that long ago, and readin this i feel how true your words are. keep up the good work. 5/5