Coach

by Brittany C   Apr 30, 2007


He wants us to push our self's.
To do are best till the end.
Saying that we have to communicate.
To work as one unit as we
pass the ball up the field.

We get pushed and scratched
and even get punched in the eye.
Then we get broken toes and fingers.
But we keep on playing till are muscles
begin to give out from under us.
If we don't do it for the team it's for coach.

Our coach tells us that we can beat anyone.
That if we are exhausted at the end of a game,
then we gave it are absolute all even when
we were hurting from this and that to play
are hearts out till the last second of each game.

Our coach believes in the team
and all the players that make it.
And we believe in are coach
because he is always there for us.
Though he may get frustrated
with us every once in a while.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Georgi

    Good poem!
    xioxoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This s an unusual poem. I liked the way you described this and the words you chose all fitted in perfectly. xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    It was kinda hard to understand.. but hey it was your writing.. and beside everyone sees differently ... but I do know this is about teamwork and not giving up.. good job I liked how it flowed and it all combined good job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Hi again,

    "He wants us to push OURselves"
    "and even punched in the eye"

    Well after my last comment I'm not sure if you're very happy with me so I'll keep this one short. Good portrayal of perseverance , guidance and companionship. 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    It is a little hard to read, but other thatn that i could see nothing wrong with this poem. Well worded, excellent imagery. keep up the good work. 4/5

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