I liked this poem. I think it ended a little too soon, but overall it was a great poem.
I love my coach. :D Hes' the best. I never even thought of writing a poem for him, Lol.
You did a good job, Keep it up.

Vert nice, although no rhyming i style find art and flow in this piece. Keep it up! 5/5

Good poem. it was kind of hard to read at some points. i like the topic though. heres a couple of mistakes u might want to fix to make it easier to read.

Then we get broken toes and (figures) im pretty sure u mean fingers.

And we believe in (are) coach. it should be "our" coach.

I agree with Greg, slightly hard to read, and having to understand it at all you HAVE to read the title. lol.. It was a great poem though, a few things that need to be fixed, but all in all good work. =)

It is a little hard to read, but other thatn that i could see nothing wrong with this poem. Well worded, excellent imagery. keep up the good work. 4/5

Hi again,

"He wants us to push OURselves"
"and even punched in the eye"

Well after my last comment I'm not sure if you're very happy with me so I'll keep this one short. Good portrayal of perseverance , guidance and companionship. 3/5

It was kinda hard to understand.. but hey it was your writing.. and beside everyone sees differently ... but I do know this is about teamwork and not giving up.. good job I liked how it flowed and it all combined good job. 5/5

This s an unusual poem. I liked the way you described this and the words you chose all fitted in perfectly. xxx alex xxx

Good poem!
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