Aww, that's lovely.

This poem serves the phrase "Poetic Justice" highly.It aknolege a point, and then specks on how "one", feel concerning the point, and then it raps up in good standing, That is a forumula, for "Poetic Success" what would make this poem greater is if you explan just a little about this other person, because that forces reader to create a picture of whats going on, great work