It's a very beautiful and sad poem. I like it.

Very touchy and these words shows the real picture of the poem...Good work
5/5

This one so nice... honeslty some lines reminds me, others words i can relate. i would really love the whole message of this poet and it really express ur feeling inside.. all the words u write are so meaningful to me.. great job5/5

Touching. i like the word choice in this poem, the emtion is outstanding. You did an awesome job here 5/5

Very nice to the both of you it was wonderful I absolutly loved it best love poem I've read all day my favorite stanza was the second one it had so much meaning to me nice work!

"Your the one I truly understand.
Your the one I want to be around.
Your my heart, my soul, my everything."
[You're] (Because you are trying to say 'you are')

My, oh my. What can I say about this poem?.. Hmm, well, the two best love poets in my eyes, on this site working together to write a love poem, could this be any better?

This was such a beautiful, romantic poem. You boys are such a talent, the ladies must love it. Excellent job on this one (aside from the mistakes) Keep it up!

Wow the two kings together lol hehehe just kidding but again no words of critisisism hun sorry lol :d

xxx aexxxx

Wow two of my favorite poets together in one.. thats preaty amazing.. and I give you guys a major smile for the fact that you are able to colaberate(sp?) in the first place its a very tricky thing to do. Im not really a big fan of this poem however, I'm not quite sure what it was but it didnt really speak to me and I had a hard time getting into it. Some of the metaphores were amazing though so nice work on that.. I think that it would be much better if you got rid of all of the "your"s in it.