Wow this is very deep and very thought out very good poem with a very good meaning hopefully the drought in austrailia will end

Very good poem! I hope everything gets back to normal there. 5/5 keep writing!

The first line was a bit confusing because it really didn't make sense, as hard I tried. I guess a pause after 'crashes' might make it work better, I'm not quite sure. That was the only problem with this poem. I liked the rhymes, they worked well. Very good metaphorical meaning for a 'last kiss'. The story, and the poem worked well together. So good job on this one.

I loved this poem.
I live in Australia too and it is very sad about what is happening.
Anyway the poem was excellent.
The imagery was great and it flowed well.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Your poems suck

Wow... i think it was really great for you to leave what the poem meant that helped alot ... its sad but beautiful.. the way you made the rainfaill the last kiss was very clever the word choice was great and filled with wonderful descriptions.. the flow was excellent i didnt have trouble with it once in the whole poem.. great job :D