Ah well done. the technique sounds kinda hard to do. and this poem, the flow was flawless. so bravo.

5/5 David

Wow. Another amazing poem.
"With an angel on the Milky Way, with golden stars in her eyes."
^ I liked that line, but at the same time I didn't like how you put 'with' in there two times. It sorta threw off the flow; just a tad.

I really liked this poem, it's extremely sweet. The kind that reminds you of the perfect wedding, with the perfect man, eh.

Keep it up, hun.
<3 Teria

I'm not a romantic
But even I have to agree
This was a sweet poem.
I don't mean
Hey DUDE, that was totally sweet.
I mean, romantic sweet.
Lol.
Although, like I said..
A lot like a story.